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A logo tryout for BGMACC (Baguio Gundam/Mecha/Arts and Crafts Community)

Enjoy! XD
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~arkgrafik Feb 10, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
Keep the colored lines and change the multi-lines by a complete shape. You will still be able to add some perspectives using some small gradients of colors to keep the strong taste of this logo. I hope you're getting my point :p

The main issue of your logo is the number of small lines. Once you get rid of this, it will be perfect. Keep the shapes, and make it plain!
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~shenkouhei Feb 12, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
Thank you very much!! I'll do that.. XD
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~arkgrafik Feb 15, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
No prob!
So, how is it going? :p
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~shenkouhei Feb 15, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
Still waiting for the gunpla community's comments.. XD
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*MartinSilvertant Feb 9, 2012  Professional General Artist
I completely agree with lefiath. There's absolutely no application for this logo as it features way too much detail. Besides, I have no idea what the symbol should symbolize or how the choice of typeface tells me anything about the brand. It's a completely generic and random logo.
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~shenkouhei Feb 9, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
Well it's just a tryout so thanks for the comments.. Any revisions would help, what changes do you think I could do here? Or should I change everything?
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*MartinSilvertant Feb 10, 2012  Professional General Artist
I would change everything. The outlines you're using in the background look quite nice but they're distracting and unnecessary, and as I said the icon doesn't symbolize anything so it could be used for virtually anything. I think you first need to establish what kind of company this client is, what kind of symbol would really represent them and what kind of typeface fits with that.
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~shenkouhei Feb 12, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
The logo is very similar to the logos used for Gundam and the font used was quite similar to the existing gundam kits, too.. So I think I'll let go of the outlines you said was distracting and leave the logo as is.. Thanks for the tips, really appreciated it! XD
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~lefiath Feb 9, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
While I like the symbol, can you actually imagine using something like this anywhere? What if you have to use smaller size than this gigantic one? There are few, but really big and obvious problems with this concept that I don't think it would be possible to use it.
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~shenkouhei Feb 9, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
Maybe the small lines didn't really help.. I need help.. :(
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